Vengeful Past, New Tomorrow

by Shinobi   Feb 23, 2010


Vengeful Past

Reminiscing a time long ago
Heart didn't know a feeling
All was covered in white snow
No medicine as merciful killing

Awaiting the first beating flesh
Pumping red redemption down my veins
Then such emotions fell to pieces
Lost in darkness, locked in chains

Screams blast from a dark void
Brings upon a restless sleep
Every last drop destroyed
Through an edge, sharp and deep

Life back than lasted a year
Agony filled my eyes with pain
Living life from tear to tear
Nothing to do but a bitter complain

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New Tomorrow

Riding back from forgotten sands
Bringer of forgiveness and care
After visiting distant lands
Also painful, cold and bare

Words before her fade away
Withering as Autumn leaves
Savior of a soring heart
A heavy Bordon she heaves

Thankful for every new dawn
By her side to live forever
Others have always withdrawn
A connection nothing shall sever

As I await a brand new day
Lighted by the morning sun
Aspire to see her, thus I may
Await for her, and never run

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I owe it all to you!
Thank you Mia, for being there for me

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  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Again I don't want to complain about a couple mixed up rhymes but if you choose to write a certain way it should be that way. The poem is excellent and I don't want people losing focus on whats important over a couple mistakes but its hard not to. I actually read poems and pay attention so I notice little things... ex. First stanza feeling and killing don't really rhyme even though they end with ïng" and then in the second part of the poem you rhymed away with heart and it threw me off again. Easily fixable...

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