Destiny

by Merdy   Mar 5, 2010


Destiny...
Are you saying our deep tenderly caring for one another is a fixed natural order to the cosmos?
We had no choice in our affection to one another.
Interesting...
Our love was established in advance
Predetermined before we could perform the first move
Your saying our actions had no influence on our destination...
In other words
The pen has written and the ink is dry.
So then....
we have no choice....
than to...
accept...
that...
it is...
over.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    I like that alot fav line: "Are you saying our deep tenderly caring for one another is a fixed natural order to the cosmos?"

  • 14 years ago

    by Merdy

    Thank you

  • 14 years ago

    by Merdy

    Thank you

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I was sad at the end when it said love was over. I believe that our true love is predetermined and it is destiny to meet them and after reading your poem, the ending, happy or sad must be predetermined as well. Good Job.