My Love Is A Dream

by Gasttlee   Mar 14, 2010


My love is a dream
that will never shine.

The cold corner
sends a black wind
that blows me away
into the dusk of no dawn.

The fire in my soul
washes away
in the shower of rain
with no return.

Everything I need
is only something I can dream.

If I had love's heart,
what would it be
for me?

The hands of darkness
shove me into a wall of confinement
turning a blind eye
before I get to see.

My love is a dream
with no life for me.

All I can do now
is give the one and only thing
I know I can give,
the love for others
and love in others.

This is my love,
to give love to all.

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  • 14 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    This was very beautifully written, and the first two lines drew me in completely. I know exactly how it feels, and I loved your choice of words.
    "The cold corner
    sends a black wind
    that blows me away
    into the dusk of no dawn."
    That was definitely my favorite stanza. (:

  • 14 years ago

    by Tori Hicks

    Oh my....
    Amazing word choice :)))

    Keep writing :)

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  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I love your choice of words and metaphors in this skillfully written free flowing poem. I really enjoyed reading this

  • 14 years ago

    by La Muse Angelique

    Wow I really loved this!
    Im in a point of my life where I feel exactly the same. I love how honest and true in emotion this writing is.

    ''The fire in my soul
    washes away
    in the shower of rain
    with no return.''

    This stanza is my favourite and very relateable.

    ''All I can do now
    is give the one and only thing
    I know I can give,
    the love for others
    and love in others.''

    Very true and yeah it's a good thing to love other people rather then a man or woman and give others your love with no exspectations.. to them you are a loveable person and those are the ones who really see it. We all wanna be loved by a special someone, and time will tell.. just never stop dreaming about a desired love because he or she is out there somewhere!

    Great writing and take care :)

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