The Subtle Effects

by Cori   Mar 22, 2010


Can we go back to the day where we met?
Can you show me what first made my heart beat?
Would you tell me the same thing?
Would you prove that all of it was you?
Why did you effect my soul?
Why can't my mind forget?
How much did you see in me?
How blind did I really seem?
Who caused you to look so deep?
Who changed my mind to see?
When did you first know?
When did I give you my heart?

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  • 13 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I liked this poem, it was so good and heartbreaking at the same time!! I think my fav line is " When did I give you my heart?" is really showed raw, natural emotion, and it was totally believable!! loved it!! :)