Comments : The Girl That's Out of Reach (Song)

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I got an intense feeling of sadness as I read this. It's almost as if it is a song to an angel in heaven. It is full of emotion and tugs at the heart strings. Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Aww Joey.. this is so deeply sad. You express your emotions so well. *hugs* Another really great write, you have great talent that will take you far. :] Keep it up!

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    The pain of losing a loved one keeps us going in one way or the other & its very hard
    to erase those memories...the depth of pain
    in your heart is felt through your words..touching..take care.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    This was a very sad poem and you get the emotion across very well. I could see with your nice description of someone looking at a picture and longing at them. Very sad but good.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    ..a heartfelt poem..with so many emotions..it really got to me incredibly. u no bet have put so MUCH emotions in this poem which u worded in a very poetic way and in a real talent..
    you do have a very special touch when ur putting ur feelings through ur words..
    so if this is a personal poem,..then u have done such an impressing job..and if its not..then it makes it more amazing..because I have beeen deeply deeply touched.

    Write more soon
    5/5
    A smile for the girl out of reach
    as I peer into the sky.

    *
    Soaked with tears
    from the moonlit sky,

    *
    They say love can kill or simply make your world
    but for me it's neither when I'm all alone,
    smiling for the girl that's out of reach.

    >>what an imagination u got !.......my fav lines