Comments : Springs Lost Beauty

  • 9 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    So sad yet so beautiful. Great write dear. This one is just mindblowing stanza

    Blinding eyes against sunlight
    Deaf to birds enchanted songs
    April rains have lost meaning
    Finding it hard staying strong

  • 9 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Not having a loved with you during the changing of the seasons can take away the beauty of it. Well done.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I love how different your piece was. I think a lot of people see spring as something mew and refreshing but you took it from a different angle and I liked that. Loved the flow of the entire piece and how well your owrds fell into place. Very nice work :) Nik

  • 9 years ago

    by Jad

    Excellent job with the contest piece and you have a vivid picture here and a very beautiful poem. I loved how like Nik said you took this poem from a different angle. Good job and keep writing.

  • 9 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This is so sad indeed, yet beautiful like everyone else has already mentioned. You did a flawless job, I really loved each stanza, line, word. Very nicely done :] *hugs*

  • 9 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    One word: Beautiful!
    I loved everything about this poem... I love how you wrote about all the seasons and the need for love in every season! Amazing. Great job!

  • 9 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    One word: Beautiful!
    I loved everything about this poem... I love how you wrote about all the seasons and the need for love in every season! Amazing. Great job!

  • 9 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Beautifull sad....especially the last evrse

    "Need love once more to waken
    Nature's beauty all around
    Filling souls again with warmth
    Melting coldness that surrounds"

    ^Hope springs eternal! Good job once again!

  • 9 years ago

    by anand singh

    Cindy, this is a sad but beautiful rendition of the changing of seasons.It is however sadder to know that a special person no longer here to witness this change, but deep in your heart you know that he is watching and experiencing the same feeling as you do.
    I enjoyed every stanza of this wonderful write.Good job.
    Paul...

  • 9 years ago

    by Corinne

    Wonderful writing Cindy - I would have written "Eyes blinded by sunlight" - or "Blinded eyes from the sun"

  • 9 years ago

    by Lu

    Cindy I truly think this is one of your best writes to date that I have read. The imagery you created is heart stopping - touching- and the word choice perfect.

    It reaches in the readers heart and tugs. And though I can't relate to the pain of losing someone so dear to my heart, I can relate to the sadness and feeling of " losing the beauty of nature"

    Very touching write Cindy ... and definitely one of my favorites by you.

    Congrats on the front page win ... very very deserving indeed !

  • 9 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Congrats on the win this week!

  • 9 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Cindy,

    I've been too slow getting 'round to commenting this poem and for that I apologise. I have read it three times now and finally have some time to myself to get some commenting done. I'd like to thank you for the supportive comments you leave upon my poems, they are muchly appreciated.

    I adored the imagery of this poem and it truely brought me to spring Here we are in winter so it was lovely to have a fast forward, only with a different contrast, a different view from someone elses eyes.. however while reading I was etched with a painful feeling, and while I cannot comprehend your loss as I have never faced something like this, i felt the emotion behind your words and that is what grasped me with this poem.

    This was just one of those poems that was bitter sweet, the sadness and the beauty combined together like a subtle contrast.

    I think you did a wonderful job. Congrats on the weekly win.

    -Mel

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Spring does bring out various emotions..and this
    is one of them..a lost love. I liked the imagery you painted with your words..good write! Congrats on the win & sorry for the delay...take care.

  • 9 years ago

    by Boy

    With spring comes cruel sorrow
    That you're no longer here
    Darkness now entombs me
    My thoughts painfully unclear

    its my favorite stanza.. the very first line tells the reader that how sad this poem would be.. and than each line goes deep and deep in the world of sorrows where i saw my past people faces for a minute. its was such a nice feelings for me that i felt. once again you brought me in that world where i saw my love.

    excellent 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Andrew

    Damn.... this poem touch me truly a beautiful poem i can relate to this feeling 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow! This poem is so beautifully written and I really love it... It's no wonder that you won, congratulations! You deserve it :) I love relating emotions to nature, and you've done that in a very calming way. My favorite stanza was the last:

    Need love once more to waken
    Nature's beauty all around
    Filling souls again with warmth
    Melting coldness that surrounds

    Beautiful words! Great job!

  • 8 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Very heartbreaking poem, the level of despair so deeply expressed that anyone reading this can't help but be moved and feel what you're going through. The advent of spring cruelly indifferent your sadness. All of this so powerfully expressed. A beautiful poem.

  • 8 years ago

    by tainted melody

    I really loved this poem. I think it flowed really well. good write ^_^

  • 8 years ago

    by tainted melody

    This was sooo beautiful...and simple yet full of meaning...great write *_*