This is a very contemparary and original style The caps scream a shared frustration.. plus the desire to be in control of lifes contrast is reflected in the last line....short and powerful

I did enjoy this

When i first read this, i thought hang on ... did she name this wrongly? but after reading it, i can see what you have done. I like this piece firstly because its short, and although it doesnt consist of many words, you can really feel the anger and frustration (especially through the last line) in this piece!

nicely written

The title definitely caught my attention. I like the idea of your poem, and the images you created in your short, choppy, and angry words.

It feels nice to simply let out your anger sometimes, doesn't it? A vent can make a wonderful poem because it consists of true deep feelings that others can easily relate to.

Beautifully written, 5/5!

mandy :)

Interesting but to me it has no flow and don't need all caps.

This is so powerful..well done :)
i cant wait now to see 2nd poem..made me interested...ur word choice is perfect
and ur poems obviously are worth it

This is very powerful.
I really like how you used only 1 or 2 words until the end. I think that emphasized the meaning of each word. I also like how you put the whole thing in caps because i believe that also emphasized the power in each word.
Something I had a hard time with was getting a picture in my head. However, I havent written any of these poems so maybe thats why, I'm just used to more detail.

Very interesting short but sweet but delivers a powerful message

Hi.

i have been through your poems. You write beautiful. i like your word choice but somehow i sense that every time you write, you are so full of rage. well i think emotion is the 2nd name of poetry and you can't negate your emotion. but don't let anger rule you, when you are write.

Cool. Don't let it go. It might try to breathe.

Definitely hit hard, I love the words you chose to express your feelings. Powerful write.
Take care