Comments : Heat (Haiku)

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You're right, hot humid days of summer produce storms.. completely relevant to today's weather, nicely done :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sylvia
    I can feel the heat and humidity coming from each word in your Haiku. Nice imagery.
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by Faithless

    Nicely worded. I like how you penned this haiku, describing the weather before the storm.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    A beautiful picture painted with so few words. I love how you were able to make such a wonderful piece with so few words making great imagery. Good job and keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I guess it must be very very hot there! This Haiku says it all..good write :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Sylvia, too deep for a short form..you are a fantastic poet.
    I felt warmth rather than heart as I read this poetic verse..

    a gr8 haiku but a gr8 Sylvia

    much love
    hugs*
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by anand singh

    A beautifiul haiku, an enjoyable read.