U did put so much emotions over here.
well done..i was gna write bout the title then
thought to compete over just one due to the lack of my time..and trust me i dont think i would have ,made such an emotionful verse

Empty my heart and my mind as well
make it invincible so it will never fail.
I loved once and that was my mistake
this vessels is damaged no longer will it break.

the rhyme scheme here was just amazing.
i loved it so much
5/5
gd luck :)

I love this :) i can feel the emotions

Empty my heart so nothing can exist
back to the era of true nothingness.
Memories cloak me with heavy emotions
apathy chokes me hazing my focus.

you have no idea how true this stanza is for me.

good rhyme. and i might have read it weird, but the word choice gave it a weird beat. but i liked it because the weird beat made me stop and pause in key places during the reading. this only added to its effect.

5/5
~Kuro

This is a well written piece & I liked it from strart to finish..take care.

You are an amazing poet. 5/5

The way you started the poem and how you ended it; it's so strong & well done. 10/5

This was amazing... very lyrical it never messed a beat ...outstanding
5/5