THE RACE IS NOT OVER

by Brix Ambray   Sep 7, 2010


Ready,get,set,go
A soft, straight road
Nice trip
Suddenly it becomes winding
Maybe I messed it up
Everything shattered
There are thorns and thistles
Hopeless,restless
Its a far away finish line
I'm not a loser...
Recharge,continue
In my duel with life,
The race is still on,,,
I haven't won yet!!!

September 05,2010
08:26pm
Polomolok, Philippines

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Thats the spirit brother. i really like poems that deals with life, and this i like. keep it up bro, hoping to read more poems like this from you. nice, really nice.

  • 13 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    " I hav'nd won yet" good stuff here
    another good read i put you on my fav. authors list' I plan on reading all your poems
    sooner or later you write some good stuff
    my friend keep them coming

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