I haven't seen to many people do a sonnet on here and yet you have done an excellent job with it. The words you used help the message come across clearly helping the reader to understand what was happening. The metaphors that you used were also very nice.

"Thou may'st decay; thy pursuits art done
no moth nor rust shall covet thy charm,
nor thy fair soul need'st not to be gone."

My favorite line by far. The imagery and overall creativity was so easily seen as you flowed form line to line with ease. So over all I am impressed with the great work and also good job on the form. Good job and keep writing.

Interestingg write myryn! Took me a while to get it,but I think I did!:p Well done!

This is an amazing sonnet it flows between the rhyme scheme perfectly

Amazing mastering of archaic english wording also

I love it