OMG kris its AWESOME i swear!
The way u expressed ur feelings madd me die 2 meet such a woman seriously!
Love the flow, the feelngs,the love and passion expressed<3
Keep it up
5/5

A very cute and sweet dedication for someone! So sweet of you to have dedicated such piece to a friend. RESPECT!

You know what sucks? That I can never find a guy who has this kind of perspective. Women are meant to be respected. This is a beautiful piece and I know that many girls on here will really appreciate to see something like this.

The form was a little sloppy but very good choice of wording. Beatifully written. I am happy to see that there are still men out there like you!

Awww such a beautiful and sweet poem! Whoever you wrote this to is very lucky... It's lovely how we all can connect to our own poetry as well as others. It's such a nice feeling. I really enjoyed your poem :)