Woh.. A powerful write and a brilliant Cinquain! :) Have never tried this form .. but after reading yours I would love to try! :)

Brilliant Meena... Well Done :)

Some words actually do ahve the power to damage a relationship beyond repair..

Evocative work from you, Meena:)

5/5 Ingrid

An excellent form to use. I love writing with this form as it gives a challenge to the writer to get the reader to understand what is happening in such few lines. Every line of your poem was carefully placed and the flow was great as well. I loved the overall idea of the poem to. Good job and keep writing.

Perfect wording, you are so right, we sometimes have so much rage inside us that we end up saying something we shouldn't and that ends up hurting someone. Very nicely written

Facinating Poem Meena
& so very true.....5/5.....Jim

Meena this is really impressing,,such a truthful piece that u worded in a very very smart way.
Ur words just hit the nail on the head.

and I cantr but agree with u...rage ..and words..are sharper than swords .,

:)

5/5

Meena this is really impressing,,such a truthful piece that u worded in a very very smart way.
Ur words just hit the nail on the head.

and I cantr but agree with u...rage ..and words..are sharper than swords .,

:)

5/5

Meena, a very good write,

So true. This piece flowed effortlessly. You shine in formed poetry. It's exciting to see what you'll come up with next. Great writing, awesome message! :)

So few words and yet they say so much. The tongue is definately a very powerful weapon and can inflict much pain. Nicely done.

Yes words are really powerful. Nothing is sharper than words. If you should compare it with a knife, most times when you get cut by a knife, it time it heal and left no traces, but with words, it's stored in the back of the mind and possible to return to the surface anytime. Well done, kel.

This is so simple and short, however its powerful and pacts a punch i like it a lot x