That is the cycle of life...from birth we experience everything in life until death takes
it all away..very nicely penned :)

Very nicely penned. the metaphors and the ability to take us from point a to point b in an enjoyable read

Seed in the soil
hopeful and youthful
like a newborn baby
alone you grow
away from all the others
^^^ben this opening is really gd i love it..made me very curious..and was well penned

Flower in the moonlight
beautiful and radiant
like a candle in the dark
alone you bloom
away from all the others
^^omg this must be my fav..stanza cause was very poetic..word choice is perfect..and the description is very very poetic...more over the comparison touched my heart !!!

Flower in the moonlight
old and withered
like an unwanted weed
alone you fade
away from all others
^^^very very sad....omg..BEn this is truly beautiful but sad..
i suggest saying:
like an unwanted weed
fading alone
away from all the others

Seed in the soil
from the old begins a new
>begins? im sure u can find a better one
cause the next line which is

like a phoenix from the ashes
^^^IS FANTASTIIIIIIIC!!!!!!!!!!

a beacon for those lost in the dark
chasing the dark away from all the others
^^^wat an ending....u blew my head off....
i think u have done a realy gd job over here..a very sad poem..which ends in a very unexpected msg

5/5!!

This poem was amazing!! I loved the metaphor you used to describe it. I think you are a brilliant writer!!!! This poem was just so sad and deep and I thought it was truly unique and amazing. You are very creative and I just loved the entire thing. 5/5. :)

My comment is to agree with all the others, there isn't anything left for me to say. Well done.

This poem does stand out