The Forest

I love this poem, I love the images and the word choice.You have done a great job with some lines, you got a lot of deep precise one; which I had a liking over..

the only thing I think i disliked is the way u repeated trees again TOO soon in the following lines

The delicate flowers sway in the breeze
Leaves dance in the trees
I keep moving through the forest
Slants of light shine through the trees
^^it would be better for your poem, and the sake of your flow; if you replace it with another word :)

The wind blows throughout the forest
Brushing sweet scents across my face
^^i think you have a very smart beginning, opening lines must be strong, and this was catchy and strong..well done

5/5