by Jess          Oct 29, 2010
    
        category :
            Sadness, depression /
            about depression
            
    
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            It Is To Hard To smile, when I Just Want To Fall Apart. | 
by Paul Gondwe
| Wow.another great poem from u.. | 
by Lynnea
| Written beautifully with obvious pain and hurt. Overall this poem is awesome(: | 
by ana
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            OH MY GOD.. I am in love with this poem.. this is so emotional and your letting out all of your feeling. i relate with this poem so much. Try not to hide so much. talk about it with someone you can trust. I'm always here! <3 | 
by Lady Nik
| I think this one was better than the first one I read. Your imagery and diction was stronger although making every word start with a capital letter was confusing. But that's just me I guess. Another good poem, I can relate. Keep it up Nik | 
| Very good poem, very emotional and relatable which is always a good thing, the rhymes were nice. Stay strong well done |