Omg I love this poem. A very sad verse. Well said, well written. Amazing word choice, the metaphors moved me from my place!

opening stanza was very strong, and the ending line was just touchy!
i loved the over all creativity, and the new ideas.
It had a nice flow, with a sad atmosphere.
I think I just love it!

5/5

This poem was indeed filled with sadness that gave this poem a great depth and passion that the writer, you, could only give it. I was really impressed by every line and the simply language you use makes it easy to understand also the flow of the poem was great as well. Great job and keep writing.

Good work with the title, your poem fit it very well. As I read, I could actually imagine a guitar gently weeping as it played these words. Well done.

This was amazing, what a great job you did with this. Keep it up girl we miss your poems from one to the other

Yet another excellent read which made me
smile. From start to end it flowed smoothly with touching visuals...good job with the challenge!