That place

by Yakari Gabriel   Nov 13, 2010


-open-
My heart,like
A book you won't read,
Out of curiosity

As,
I invite you,
to walk on
The runway of my hopes
Charm me,
Flatter me,

Sit..
On the chair,
Of my soul

-Wait-

For the best things,
Take time to develop..

And,Now
Let me take you.
To that place,
Where unlike snow
Dreams don't melt in the sun.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I love this piece!
    I love the descriptions , the word choice, and the wording.

    the way u separated your lines, was really effective.
    The emotions are well exposed, it had this passionate tone..which I loved.

    Deep, and creative, so I would suggest you to change ice-cream..to ( ice) or snow..or what ever that you find fits your message well.
    >cause for a poem with this deepness, as a reader I did not like that image.

    the ending line was just fantastic..so if u change ice cream..reread and see the effect :)

    5/5 SURE excellent job!

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