Put on my favorite dress
Legs below strong and bare
Wandering streets of this town
No longer drawing stares
Though these just may look like 4 lines but i know the history of sadness behind it.
No matter after how many days/months you write, magic of expressing sadness/emotions will remain forever. Great write.
You are a beautiful woman, inside & out. Don't let anyone tell you differently. A great poem, I think the only people who truly can appreciate this poem and understand the depths of your emotions are your friends and those whom have stood beside you through everything. A truly sad poem that touches my heart very deeply. The wording was perfect.
This piece has such a subtle intensity behind it... and the emotion..!! Just amazing.
This piece is so beautiful.. I could not possibly choose a single line or verse in which was a favourite. Sensational!!