Comments : Running out of Days

  • 8 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Put on my favorite dress
    Legs below strong and bare
    Wandering streets of this town
    No longer drawing stares

    Though these just may look like 4 lines but i know the history of sadness behind it.
    No matter after how many days/months you write, magic of expressing sadness/emotions will remain forever. Great write.
    Welcome Back

    all the best and take care

  • 8 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Aww Cindy... that is such a touching write... sometimes i too feel that time is running out... heartfelt imageries you have painted here. beautiful write

  • 8 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I am reading this poem of yours and loving it everytime, thank you for posting/sharing.

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Cindy you finally posted this. It reeks of sadness and hopelessness and dreams of how things once were.

  • 8 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You are a beautiful woman, inside & out. Don't let anyone tell you differently. A great poem, I think the only people who truly can appreciate this poem and understand the depths of your emotions are your friends and those whom have stood beside you through everything. A truly sad poem that touches my heart very deeply. The wording was perfect.

  • This piece has such a subtle intensity behind it... and the emotion..!! Just amazing.
    This piece is so beautiful.. I could not possibly choose a single line or verse in which was a favourite. Sensational!!
    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This really touched my emotions

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    The sadness and hopelessness withi this write really finds a way to the reader's heart and grabs it with pain..a touching write Cindy..take care.

  • 8 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    This is one of the most unique, moving poems that I have passed by these days..

    the wording was such descriptive and i felt like i was walking beside you.
    sharing your feelings..feeling your emotions and being touched by the word choice.

    the title took me right away..and oh how i can relate to many..many..many points. Through the weakness in this poem only shows me how BRAVE you are. that you are FACING it.

    the hopelessness I felt only showed me the FAITH you have. that you are sharing it.

    i am moved, I am touched, and I have added this to my verrryyyy favorite poems.

    I love itttt..oh i love you!

    5/5
    hugs***
    we will discuss this piece ^_^

  • 8 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Excellently penned cindy!

    Really well written and very emotional in parts. I think many people will relate to this as we are all on borrowed time in one way or another

    5/5