Fake..!!

by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA   Dec 15, 2010


This emotional ride
Deep down inside
This burning ache
Can it all be fake?

Was there ever a 'we'?
Or was the joke on me
Could you be so cruel?
You took me for a fool

This blinding rage
The words on this page
are etched into my mind
The truth I had to find

Why did you do it to me?
Were you ever truly happy?
What did I ever do to you?
I wish that I only knew...

Was it truly all just fake?
Just to make my heart break?
My emotions were all real
This all seems so surreal...

The emotions are haywire
My aching heart is on fire
Why did this happen to me?
Why can't I just be happy?

What we had was just a laugh
It makes me want to barf!
All this time, it was all a lie
You've just made me want to die..!!

By Alisha Sherden
01/12/10

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  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Good poem, lots of raw emotion that readers can relate to. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    Thanks for taking the time to read it

  • 11 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Its a sad thing to happen to someone, this kind of experience, real sad. Most ppl get blinded by the truth when it comes to love until the time comes when the lie becomes too obvious. Anyways, this ones kinda an old poem of yours so Im hoping the pain healed away. About the poem, I like it, being straightforward (without being boring) and the lenght of each line, doesnt bring you to a stop until the end. Real good.

  • 13 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    Hey Krista, thanks for your comment.
    Yeah, will definitely check it out. (:

  • 13 years ago

    by Krista

    I can relate to this poem.............
    Check out mine, "Appreciate Me".
    It's kinda similar...

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