by TerraLeigh Dec 20, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
|
This fallen angel has risen, to face another day. |
by adriaan
|
The atmosphere and choice of words really came through in this poem, especially the rhyming couplets. Usually the poet would write out each line separately, but you've written some parts out in prose and it's different, and gives a really good effect in my opinion. |
|
Beautiful flow, an awesome sketch on real day life… That I touched. |