No one cares

Why does it seem like no one cares?
Why does it seem like i am made out of air?
Like i don't fit in here?
Like i don't belong here?

*I liked this stanza. It was simple and straight to the point. The rhyme was okay though. I also liked that you asked questions. It makes it seem like you're talking to someone.*

There are things worth changing.
There are things worth fighting for.
There are thing you cant change,
but you just got to deal with them.

*You forgot an "s" after thing in the second line. I didn't like this stanza that much. You talk about things being worth saving and fighting for and that got me excited. Made me think you were going to forget those people who had put you down but then you just accept it and that's kind of a let down*

People say i am a big mistake.
People say i am a disgrace.
People say i am not worth saving,
that i am beyond help,
that i am am beyond forgiveness.

*A very sad ending. I hope you have learned that everyone has a purpose it's just up to you to find what that purpose is and fufill it. Keep writing dear. -Nik*

This one is great, but so sad. I write stuff like this too though:) No one is worthless or not worth saving. I like the way you worded your statements in this. easy flowing and understandable!! yr very talented!

I really enjoyed this alot (:

Hi Kelwin, this poem has alot of questions and no answers, the repition works well for the poem but leaves the reader up in the air. This may be your intent and if so you might be finished. Nut if you think of the answers you would advise somebody in this situation you may have another couple of stanzas and a more rounded poem.