I can relate to this poem. I remember a young lady of sixteen told me once she wished she eighteen I told her to keep wishing rather to be careful what she wished for . I enjoyed this poem

You may want to check the possessive pronoun in the third line though it would work ether way for me ...you or your

I think the same thing:D

Very true, we all wish that as we get older, and when we are young we wish the opposit, nicely done

Awesome job!!! keep writing you are really talented!!!

We all wish we were at sometime. Nicely Penned!!!