Nested.

by ghosts in bloom   Feb 4, 2011


Light yawns in the womb of dawn,
spritzing the earth's skin with sticky citrus.
As dew ridden fingers are stretched
across the beak of a nested bird,
muscles contract - releasing song.

A deep auditory flurry of rustling wings
tickles each jagged branch below,
leaving Light to chase these charming shadows
along planes of prickled green.

Weathered wings embrace the breaths of other cuckoos,
warm with their guttural currents -
whilst new wings make haste against the flock of hours
within Time's syllabic camaraderie.

Each flight endued with Hunger's drive
is bound for broken bits of the tallest tree,
yet amidst this frenzied dance of winged thieves,
several twigs linger - untouched - on a bed of moss
'neath a grandfather oak.

One bold robin swoops,
eyes fixed on gold chips of timber,
only to be jarred by a fattened crow
whose rotten gaze splinters the robin's melody.

Silence trickles in with the clouding of danger,
each creature frozen in deliberate fear
until some bit of soil folds under crow's feet,
attracting its tawny eyes to a squirming lunch.

Our red-breasted soldier chirrups,
now advancing on his rediscovered treasure:
adoringly clasping every scrap laid still
upon a thick moss in its grateful beak.

Light tiptoes through the tips of leaves,
painting the ground a colorful mosaic
as outstretched wings catch wind.
The robust beauty of a life in flight,
sweetened only by the pinnacle of day.

February 3rd 2011
(c) Novalyn Grace RR

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  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win :)

  • 13 years ago

    by pinklady

    I really love your work its so inspiring i don't have to write an sa on this piece its just beautiful defo 5/5 for me x

  • 13 years ago

    by Blissful

    Oh how I've missed your work <3

  • 13 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Wonderful story told sensually. The contrast between the preoccupation with sustenance (Crow) against the need for nurturing (Robin) is well done. Perfect phrase: "silence trickles in."
    I find your imagery captivating. Whatever the actual meaning behind this poem, as Courageous Dreamer references, it stands on its own. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    There are so many lovely images of nature in this poem, you feel as if you are standing in the middle of all this beauty soaking it in. Since you already explained the actual meaning behind the poem, which is hidden; I will not really go into depth with my comment. I loved the idea though as it relates perfectly to your personal situation. I can really see the reflection of that in your poem. A beautiful write, you take us through so many lovely images, emotions, smells, thoughts, sounds.