Bubble - That's life (String-Haiku)

by Mr. Darcy   Feb 23, 2011


The sculptor breathes once
Releasing formed perfection
Glass sphere drifts away

Weightlessly drifting
Waltzing like a curled feather
A clear membrane orb

Iridescent swirl
Slows and quakes for a long breath
And in a blink - pop

M.Moran
30.11.10
13.20

edited 23.2.2010 *Thanks Ingrid*

Haiku - A Japanese poem composed of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables. Haiku often reflect on some aspect of nature.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Nicely written. You gave a good description of a bubble. You used good wording and it was a good length. I see nothing that needs fixing.

    I gave it a 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Soft Parade

    I really enjoy Haiku poems and you have nailed it here for me with such wonderful imagery.

    iridescent swirls

    ^^

    beautiful image, captures bubbles in one line for me.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Much better this way, Michael!

    It looks so majestic on the page, truly beautiful:)

    I could almost see little Lucas doing this:)

    5/5 Ingrid

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