Scent of life (tanka)

by Larry Chamberlin   Mar 5, 2011


This park, deserted
save for Dragon and myself:
golden retriever;
he stops at every scent spot,
blind - he does not heed the night.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ste

    I like this very much. its beauty and clarity is in its simplicity. I can understand the moment and the words, each in turn.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I love this Tanka.. I usually find it hard to write one without interrupting the flow..

    but you managed to keep it rhythmic with this piece.

    Nature poems are so refreshing..

  • 13 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Turned on to Tanka (waka) by lostlove1
    hers is much better

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