If i

by Miss Lonely Teacher   Mar 24, 2011


If i knew then
what i know now
would my choices be the same?

if i knew when
what where and how
would i still play the game?

if i told you of my sin
to whom would i bow
and would i still be to blame?

so take my hand off of the pen
now, within me your wisdom please endow
standing here i can't believe how far i finally came

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  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww.. this is a very interesting poem... I like that most lines started with "If I knew then" .. I actually feel like that should be the title! But "If I" is fine as well :)

    Well done!

  • 13 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    It has wonderful lines that rhymed and match perfectly. not too long, not too short, just the right length to make the reader yearn for more. plus the subject, life, ive always liked poems about them. this is beautiful.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cupids Got A Gun

    I like this a lot too. ive had all those ssame feelings! its really good:)

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