Comments : Whenever I See Someone Cry

  • 13 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    WOW! This is good. Haha u should be glad u haven't seen me cry!

  • 13 years ago

    by mira

    Lovely the words are so true and sensetive
    i like it:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    A well penned piece you have written here. Your opening definitely created this scene of loneliness. It's extremely sad when we see, ones tears flow so heavy, and not know why they cry so.

    I do have a couple of suggestions though in this line.
    "Question beings to linger, the reasons behind"
    ^ was "beings" suppose to be "begins"?

    And this line
    "Wind begin to push its stillness, I'm learning to fly"
    ^ I think this line would flow a little better if "begin" was "begins"

    Those were all my suggestions. Overall this piece is definitely a work of art.
    Take care