The hollow's devine: nothing's call (room 3)

by Mello193   Apr 14, 2011


Now forever fall
Bliss in black
Falling down
Nothing's call
Yourself slipping away
Brand new eyes
In this realm
Where all light dies
Forget your name
Erase your pain
Consumed in lies
A place in pieces
A place to dream
In endless cries
Almost dead
Barely alive
Much more than this
Emptiness
Can you survive

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  • 13 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Continuing...

    I really like these poems.... A LOT!

    You see..I ponder on the nothingness quite a bit myself. I myself am more the optimist on the whole topic... but the concept of nothingness is still a deep fascination of mine.

  • 13 years ago

    by Mello193

    The last lines are

    Much More Than This,
    Emptiness
    Can you survive?

    i always exclude punctuation haha
    thank you for your comment though ^u^

  • 13 years ago

    by XxLastHopexX

    This poem is well written. I am however curious on what I was supposed to get out of the last could lines. was it:

    Much more than this
    Emptiness
    Can you survive.

    OR

    Much more than this
    Emptiness,
    Can you survive?

    It was just a thought. I wasn't sure if you excluded punctuation on purpose. Either way, the poem was great.

  • 13 years ago

    by Rihanna

    I loved it

    Great job hun(: x
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Madison

    Forget your name
    Erase your pain
    this part is my favorite, names seem to hold so much grief sometimes it would be easier to just forget, you have a way with words

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