My Garden Gives Evidence Of My Existence

by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit   Apr 25, 2011


..if my garden could
speak of my love for its life,
sweet pause would doubtless
be made with a smile for my
childlike devotion as well..

A Farewell Tanka...
from a LithuanianJewishGreatGrandMother....
'-)

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  • 12 years ago

    by trippetta TC

    Love the form and flow..
    wish to see you on here again.
    Sooner

  • 14 years ago

    by Decayed

    It's so refreshing to read such natural, alive poems.
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    A beautiful poem as always.
    Shall the winds ever guide you back to our presence we shall be the lucky ones.
    Peace,
    Kay

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    You are so sweet, so creative, so just so amazing..
    this have one of the most incredible description that i have ever passed by...

    Roxxxxxxxx...dont leave :(
    I am begging now lol..
    pleaseeeeeeeeeeee

    ofcourse five out of five
    :)

    Perfect

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