Mistake

by Kelwin lost in thought   Apr 26, 2011


My life is one big mistake
i wish i could erase
all the wrong i have done

why cant my life
be more like a book
then i could rip out the pages i don't like
then i could erase what i don't need

i could give my life the happy ending
but sadly its not
i cant do anything
to fix my life

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  • 12 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    Awww..... but you can do now.... hold no regrets in life....... as much poem is concerned its quite depressing but well expressed the feelin of pain :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Salina Is Beautiful

    AMAZING POEM

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxSwissCheesexox

    Sooo... this is very depressing. To be honest, you are not a mistake. You are just amazing.
    you belong here just like everyone else.

    The poem is good. Improve on it a bit more and it can become better. =D

  • 13 years ago

    by Helpless rose

    Stop it... you aren't a mistake, and you know it.
    I love you

  • 13 years ago

    by Miss Lonely Teacher

    But then the overall result would not be the same, right? your story wouldn't have the same characters and settings or things would be missing because everything ties together.

    one page may have a fall but on the same page, there'd be the standing back up and learning. you get rid of one, it changes the other ^_^

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