Nicework both of you i really like this one

I would love to see the whole world pray this beautiful poetic prayer eloqently lifting their heart soul mind and strength reflected and refracted by this inspiring message.

Wow! Great collaboration! First, I must say both your styles really meshed well together. That's really great! I loved the poem... I loved the idea and the theme. I think the repetition of the first stanza made it even more meaningful... I loved the positive ending. Very nicely done. Great job!

I agree with michael if the whole world could just pray your words, things would be just great!
this is heart warming, I really love it, and though I am not in the mood of reading no ones work I am glad I read this LOL...it made me smile and gave me such a feeling and some thoughts..

well done!
penned and nailed!
5/5

It being a collab just makes your poem stronger and helps it deliver the message it carries, which is a strong message in the selfish lives we nowadays lead...

I like how it goes like a dialog and it sound like you are an echo to eachother... Like all people have the same wish as you. The ending is lovely, I liked the optimism in it. I also liked the fact that you both said pray with me, and than pray for me... which send another message. That we all have similarities and differences and you have to help in not only what satisfied your needs but also the needs of others and they will do the same... :) Great work!

I would love to be able to write like this i have to say tha was EPIC!! i can say no more