The Prince

by Giegielove Goddess Poet   Jun 3, 2011


Sun set rays kiss of infinite time,
brighten up my way
beyond the smile and beauty
for this LOVE touching through me.
Feel it when the evening come
dancing amusingly in the moonshine
Innerly feels so fine.

Open his heart at this time
heavenly pleasure will always be prime.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    Hi, I like the images this poem portrays but,

    what is the first comma for?

    Should it be;

    Sunset rays kiss of infinite time?

    Or

    Sun sets, rays kiss of infinite time?

    Or should I mind my own business?!!!

    I like the last line, can be interpreted in a number of ways.

    regards

    Darren

    • 11 years ago

      by Giegielove Goddess Poet

      Hi, thanks for the comment, i forgot to review
      that piece, the comma must be not on that line...

      ~Giegielove Goddess Poet~

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