In my arms

by Colm   Jun 7, 2011


We flit around the cobbled square
under the snow of moonlight.

I swirl, and you are prose in my arms..

You borrow Mona Lisa's smile,
I hear honey in your whispers
and you feel heavy in my silence.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Boy

    Short but romantic and sweet poem.... good work 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Okay, I really liked "You Borrow Mona Lisa's Smile," but I personally liked more the thought of someone being prosed in your arms. That's a sweeter line in my own personal opinion.

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Exquisite, romantic, unique... with beautiful images. You should write more of this type Colm!

    Loved... "snow of moonlight." :)

    A beautifully crafted poem.. by a talented hand. Bravo

  • 14 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Really good write and i loved this line >>>You borrow Mona Lisa's smile,

    its meant to be the most famous and beautiful smile in the world i just thought it was enchanting x

  • 14 years ago

    by Kiko

    I really enjoyed this short, but powerful write.
    There is a lot of emotion packed in it.

    I'm having a bit of trouble picturing what "prose" looks like. Perhaps change to "frozen." Also, the Mona Lisa line doesn't seem to really fit in with the rest.

    All in all, a very nice read.

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