The Sounds You Made When I Left

by Hurtingsoul   Jun 14, 2011


Mmmmmm
The sound you made when you woke up

Ooh
What slipped out of your mouth when I said I was in love

Huh?
The face you made when you saw I wasn't happy about my confession

Ummm...
This is what you mumbled when you awaited my explanation

WHAT?
You screamed this when you realized, you weren't the one

WHY?
The word you kept repeating when all was said and done

Nooo!
You shouted this as I was leaving out the door

Swhooooh
I heard this when you sucked your breath in on the floor

PLEASE!
You yelled

DON'T!
You begged

LEAVE!
You pleaded

Me...
This word you said quietly, but it was all that I needed

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A breakup sometimes doesn't need coherent words...

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  • 12 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I liked all of this except for the "Swhooooh"..I wasn't exactly sure what sound that was supposed to be. But I like the over-all message of this poem and what you said at the end about not needing coherent words. 5/5!!

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