Lost hope
by Osaretin Ayodele Ogbemudia Jun 26, 2011
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I kept hope in my pocket for so long but one day I lost it. Someone took it away from me because I wasn't using it |
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14 years ago
I would suggest putting this in a quote
or having it be a short poem, but depicting
more of what it felt like in your pocket, unused,
and how you felt when it was stolen.
The idea was really heartbreaking.
But I like the idea that we all have some
amount of hope in our pocket,
some use it fully, some let it sit
without any emotions.....soon time
will take it, someone who is desperate,
leaving you just as lonely.
Interesting take, hope to read more!
Welcome to P n Q!
