Self Contemplation

by White Orchid   Jul 2, 2011


Will I fall hard
Will I never fall
Will I tell you
Will I hold back

Will walls collapse
Will guards remain
Will my heart float
Will it stay under

Will this happen
Will it never begin
Will I find love
Will I remain lonely

Will you stay
Will you leave
Will you take my hand
Will you never let go

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  • 12 years ago

    by Kuro

    Questions i often ask myself.
    nice job and thanks for sharing

    ~Kuro

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... I really enjoyed this poem! I love how each line begins with "Will" and I love all the questions you ask in this poem. Many of these questions go through my mind too so it was nice to read this poem. Great job!

  • 12 years ago

    by RynZelara

    Kinda reminds me of pacing back and forth. xD Sometimes when we pace so much, we forget to see how pretty the floor is.

  • 12 years ago

    by tainted melody

    This was soo different from your usual style but i liked it. I prefer your usual but this was still a really good write. ^_^

  • 12 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Its to me you want find hope it you do nice job

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