This is amazing :)

I like the fact that you talk about true facts, unfortunately this a reality but even though it isn´t something pretty to hear about the way your works the word around makes it awesome :)

I'm glad you even deal with this topic in your poems rather than forget about it. I liked flow and rhyme and I thought it was a good idea telling the story out of the parents point of view. The emotions you expressed fit to how a relative would feel in that situation.

I agree though that prostitution should stop and I hope that your poem may encourage those who are able to help to actually do something. Yet I don't think it's easy to get out of it once you're in, otherwise it wouldn't be as spread as it is.

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!

I won't comment more..

NOMINATION!!!!!!

Your plea to escape that lifestyle was commendable. Its a good poem filled with good advice.
It's a dangerous profession, not only for girls but for the guys that decide this is how to make a living.

This piece brought such reality breaking awareness....I like how you told it from the parent's view, their concern, their wish for peace and a better life. We may not understand every girls' motives, they may feel trapped or like that is all they are worth, but there is more dignity than that.

Beautifully written and tragic.
God bless.

MaryAnne

So many young gilrs are affected by this and
sadly most of the time they are forced to do
this type of work regardless of the danger that awaits them...wish there was a way to help these girls and make them see that this
not worth it..

I never see something like this wow man

I never see something like this wow man

This is amazing hun, its so true yet so sad, so many people prefer to turn a blind eye on the traggic lives some girls live, i've never read anything like this, beautifully written and such a powerful message, i hope this poem saves lives, its got the potential too. fantastic work hun.
take care
xkimx

I got aides

So sad, so real, so preventable. If the entire world got together and made it illegal, so many of innocent lives will be protected. Flesh trade in some countries just reminds us all nomads living in modern society.

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This is so real, it unfortunately happens quite often, more than we probably even know about. It's so sad how some girls feel so low in their life they turn to prostitution to get by or to just feel something, and then some have no choice, they get caught up in a prostitution ring and have no way out... breaks my heart. Anyway, this is a great, powerful poem. Great job. 5/5