My Cold Love

by BEglen   Jul 13, 2011


You say you didn't want to see me anymore,
It was like my heart hit the floor,
You closed the door on my Love once more,

The pain of your words hurt me deeply,
As did the blade across my wrist slit me deeply,
The warmth of my love for you runs out my arm,

Will you come save me from this self harm,
The time I've spent with you makes me feel complete,
So there no need I see to stop the bleed,

I feel cold, without you're warmth
Or is it because the dark puddle that grows beneath my limp arm,

I enjoyed the one only day we woke to the morning rays,
But I fear, You will not come .
As I fear I will not see the coming of the next sun..
I'm Cold.

I Love you.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I like the imagery here... just mind the grammar. Keep it up. :)

    "I feel cold, without you're warmth
    Or is it because the dark puddle that grows beneath my limp arm,"

    ^ this part is very good, it shows the agony and portrays the title.

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Very touching and very good :) its sad.
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jon914

    Dark