Space Bound [song title contest]

by Larry Chamberlin   Jul 19, 2011


I dropped into the dream
already in progress, for years
it seemed, maybe eons;
when you deal with stuff
buried in the unconscious
there is no time reference.

The ship left the pad, carried
us to the outermost orbit,
then cast us out to a slow drift;
we had to correct the spin
to avoid Sun's glare,
so it took a moment to see Her.

Earth, blue and white, darker
shadows came into focus:
continents - forms revealed
creeping past us 100,00
miles below our feet
disappearing into the night.

She was so majestic I lost time
again, could not remember
why we were here, or who
we were, just knew the feeling
of weight gone from my back
with no pain in my feet.

Nudged in the side, turned,
a hand held out a bag, tools
and pointed - the station;
yes, the silent grave, non-stone
marker of those before us
died from no known cause.

Released tiny streams of air
enough to propel us to the hatch;
turned the wrench, opened,
air hissed from the outer port,
felt death; sealed out space
and opened the inner door.

Bodies floated in the entry deck,
suits unsealed, the answer clear:
a tiny hole let in sun blaze; larger
gaping wound in opposite wall;
space debris at mach 2000
no one stood a chance.

Before I began to philosophize
about the suddenness of life
stolen, being unprepared,
I turned, glimpsed earth through
the gap, recalled we weren't sent
to find out, but to correct.

Power welled within my arms,
hands ejected gloves on their own
as aura raised from each finger,
gathered together, enveloped
the nearest corpse, pulled together
the suit and warmed the human.

Each of us brought back our target,
raised body temp to 98
and restored circulation
where space had frozen blood;
why they had not exploded
unknown, but blinking eyes don't lie.

A full complement of crew
and rescuers giving support
moved to the living area, sealed
the door, repressurized the cabin
and finally removed their suits,
settling down to assess needs.

Often times have we been used
never before here in space, but now
that has changed; as man leaps out
he must draw on ageless hope,
keep close to him old friends,
so angels now will fly in space.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    When I looked on the length of this poem, I thought awwwwwww.. It would be so bad :p
    But hey.. It turned to be very very very good!
    There were so many descriptive, intermixing details that gave beautiful depth to the poem.. The numbers tightened these terrestrial and space images and made the piece more real.
    And it was a smart piece that was written for a certain double message.
    One the first level, it was used to describe the evolution of species.. And it was so obvious!
    The second level, somehow hidden, I think it was intended to describe a very personal journey.. And this is what made it unique and original!
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Yes, you've caught me out: the poem is a double allegory. On one level it is about personal growth in my own lifetime, as seen through a dream sequence. On another level, which I did not intend at first, it is about the psychological evolution of the species.

  • 12 years ago

    by Saerelune

    It's obvious that you're describing a journey in space here, but I also have a feeling that the words you use in your poem mean much more. The way you describe the earth in all Her gracefulness and the way you philosophize about life, makes me think that this is also a spiritual journey. I'm not sure whether I interpreted this right as I found it hard to concentrate on the central message of this poem. There are many details (such as the numbers) which say nothing to me, but do add a realistic touch to the poem. It could also be me just looking for too much into this poem, only the writer knows. For now, it certainly had made me ponder.

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