Waiting for Forever

And also, use punctuality, the poem will flow alot better if you use comma's and full stops.
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Tara-Kay

I have a few pointers which i hope may help,
stear away from the same word, the word wait in the first lines is confusing, maybe

"It seems I am waiting,
forever i must wait,
neverending"

The rhymes were simple, and common therefore not too effective.

However there is potential so keep writing,

love always,
Tara-Kay