Waiting for Forever

by Dark Shadows   Jul 28, 2011


I wait and wait
waiting a never to end wait.

For you
time swept by
you moved on.

For me
Time stands still
immovable like a rock
I stand alone
at the crossroad you left me
With tired tearful eyes
Eyes tired but wide open

Waiting for my dreams to come true
Waiting to spend a lifetime with you
I'm sure someday
you'll feel this way,too
For that someday
I'll wait forever

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  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    And also, use punctuality, the poem will flow alot better if you use comma's and full stops.
    xxxx
    Tara-Kay

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I have a few pointers which i hope may help,
    stear away from the same word, the word wait in the first lines is confusing, maybe

    "It seems I am waiting,
    forever i must wait,
    neverending"

    The rhymes were simple, and common therefore not too effective.

    However there is potential so keep writing,

    love always,
    Tara-Kay