Crushed Life

by Jyoti Rawat   Aug 19, 2011


With hope tide rises
To meet fate of rock
Crashes to merge
In the arms of sand

Crushed waves embrace dust
Rejoin tides with new will
Just to crash again
In the name of hope

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  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Love the metaphors... 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    There is a lot of depth in this poem...Keep writing...

  • 12 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Superb dear, diz onez composed better dan d hindi version of it...

    Ya we expect sumthin... But it neva happens as expectd..
    Hope rises each tym it falls just lyk a child lrnin 2 stand on its feet...

    Wonderful wonderful short yet meaningful poem...

    Keep it up... Keep d passion of poetry widin goin...:)...;)

  • 12 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hope rises and Hope crashes but life goes on, great write indeed

    all the best and take care

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Gud start..continue nw

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