The Fright of Fear

by iamnothingbutnumb   Aug 20, 2011


Frightful fear of twisted fun
Falling lonley life undone
Feeling down feeling scared
Fighting with feelings unprepared
Feeling beaten feeling bad
Fractures fall without a fight
Finally twisted fun has won
Why should we feel so full of fright?

This is a poem i had written for school a while back. Please let me know what you think.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Wendy

    Feeling lonely life undone- I often feel like their is something I should be doing that in another life time or a parralell world Ihave a life that I've acclomplished things this life this world feels so hollow. When fear seems like all you have that just going out interacting with people is scary after a while you just go numb

  • 12 years ago

    by Wendy

    Feeling lonely life undone- I often feel like their is something I should be doing that in another life time or a parralell world Ihave a life that I've acclomplished things this life this world feels so hollow. When fear seems like all you have that just going out interacting with people is scary after a while you just go numb

  • 12 years ago

    by Mushh

    Beautiful poem, I just feel that if you're going to start it as a rhyming poem, it should continue this way all the way through, not saying all poems have to rhyme, of course they don't but I think it loses rhythm if firstly it rhymes and then it doesn't. It's a very good poem though :) Keep writing! x