Springs Expressions(:

by MyaEve   Aug 25, 2011


A faltering flower;
here and there.
Winds rustling;
in the morning air.

Wispy Clouds resting;
on the light blue sky.
A minuscule river;
won't ever run dry.

Light dew drops dancing;
on blades of grass.
Birds gliding effortlessly;
with time to pass.

Spring rushing in;
summer long gone.
Seasons expressing;
upon your own lawn.

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  • 14 years ago

    by yogi73

    Great imagery. I liked how smoothly it read.

  • 14 years ago

    by MyaEve

    Thank you much, love<3

  • 14 years ago

    by Mostafa

    Well done My ! : 3
    I loved the flow of the poem and I keep reading it over and over !
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by MyaEve

    Thank you, Cynnie. And ah, I see. I will(:

  • 14 years ago

    by Saerelune

    This is cute. :) The the sweet rhymes, short lines, and the fairytale-landscape. I am a bit undecided about your punctuation as it is a bit distracting, but on the other hand, if you take it away, things will read awkward. Hmm. Perhaps take each stanza's second and fourth line's capital letter away? So it eyes less heavy.

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