Torn into Pieces.

by MyaEve   Dec 4, 2011


A mistake whipped
through the night wind
as I walked into your
deathly plan.

You were all smiles
as you stabbed a dagger
straight through my already
broken heart.

Tears shed the color red,
my last living image was
of your torturous face
snickering.

~
Killing humans,
who's souls are already
long gone.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    I like to read nd have poems corresponding to my emotions,feeling and state...yup ur writing was tha one ! I liked it,the touch u had,Awesome !

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This is such a powerful poem the image you set was breath taking .. the last lines stateing tht humans souls are gone i do agree with tht most people sell there sold to the devil theses days

    very well written 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Your sad piece spoke volumes to me. I can relate to it in so many ways.

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