Puppy ( first poem for little kids)

I definitely see you writing for the younger crowd not only in this piece, but perhaps all your poetry together. You have quite an interesting style and thoughts for poems. They could definitely use some more originality, but like I said, I see these poems being something in a children's book or something like already mentioned by other poets. Not a bad thing really, just the kind of poet you are :)

I think this is a good poem for children because it is not too hard to understand and it has something funny in it. Children can also relate to the things you've mentioned so they can imagine it really well, which is quite important I guess though I have to admit I never wrote a poem like this.

It's a poem that children would love. Puppies and kids go together . I've never tried writing a children s poem good job

Connie