Time Passing

Can't add to the others comment, it was a good write and an enjoyable read

Connie

Dib said enoguh..

I'm going to say, this is just one of the best poem I've ever read on this site.

You just got straight to the point!

I think such poems are hard to make, for you need to deliver the message you want to deliver meaningful, and full :)

And you penned it!

I love poems like this, no nonsense, straight to the point, exact. This makes the poet create lines that are short but musical, in this case, its exactly that way, short and musical. You did really good here my friend. A winner.