Thing Called Love

by Brittany C   Aug 29, 2011


What are these feelings
Churning, brewing inside?
Filling me up, building
spilling over at the edges.

Tightening my heart
when you are near.
Your colon numbing
my mind starts stumbling.

So I turned to a friend.
Ask, "What could this mean?"
She says "You silly girl.
It is a thing they called love."

She turns away
with a smile upon her lips
walking away,
leaving me to ponder.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    Very sweet and innocent! i loved it
    it makes me want to start writing love poetry again

    very good!
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Dave

    Another good one, very true feelings

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    A very gentle and innocent poem. I remember feeling this way once. I encourage you to keep growing as a writer.

    p.s. Thank you for reading and commenting on many of my poems, it's greatly appreciated! It's wonderful to have complete strangers from around the world feel a connection with your words. It makes the world seems a little brighter, no? :)

    - mandy 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow this is really really good I so relate :) 5/5

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