Thank u very much

This is nice. It is sweet and it is simple. Good job

Thank u Dreamer, i appreciate it

This was amazingly beautiful. 5/5

This was amazingly beautiful. 5/5

Thank you Malazjha, i really appreciate ur comment

I liked it. It was different. Nicely worded. It flowed good and is a good length.

gave it a 5/5

Thank u Rose

I think this is a well written poem that describes the situation and the feelings really well. It flows quite well and I like your choice of words. Well done.

This is a very good poem and i wish i had more to say but it was all very great. i loved it and it has true meaning :) 5/5

Beautifull!
ive read nothing like it

its always good to appreciate your mother =)

I was hooked on this piece from the very first line. Absolutely awesome. A very nice flow and well just beautiful.

Connie

What a moving tribute to Mom! well done

Sparkling the flame of trust, joy and happiness,
the backbone to everyone's success
The pillar of hope in every family

I'd suggest using Sparking vs. Sparkling, even tho a mother does both, I felt in this stanza your mom is "Sparking the flame of trust..." just my opinion. but beautful poem.

I enjoyed the poem. The word "pedigree" threw me off though, I found it didn't really fit into place, almost as if you were looking for a word to rhyme. aside from that, very good

Really good. Just the pedigree word threw me off. As I was reading I kept on imagining a child with his mom and as I approched that sentence I thought about a dog. XD hehe...aside from that the poem is great.

Thanks guys..i hav just removd the 'pedigree' part..

Thanks guys..i hav just removd the 'pedigree' part..

So Beautiful!
So Real,!
I Love The Ending, "Watching Over Me Like A Guardian Angel"..
Superb. :)
5/5 :D
-Jessi

This is a very sweet poem.

"Your love extends high like that of an Amazon tree
With comforting words,
you put my mind at ease,
watching over me like a Guardian angel"

^ loved your ending

Though I cannot really relate to your piece, since I've lost my mom. :) But it was tender, I liked some lines.
Gentle write.