No Family of mine
by Justin Sep 4, 2011
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I let you into my life growin up your were the grandmother of a lifetime. but when your sister died you messed up you stole the house you threatened my mother for 5k that wasn't even given to you, you sent your grandchildren out to threaten your own family your no family to me anymore grandmother of a lifetime no not anymore grandmother of a lifetime never again I don't need you sinkin us, hope you float Lying through my teeth, I hope you just drown, drown I said if you could be where I'm at bye bye You'd wanna be you too I'm living without you If you felt the way I feel I bet you'd be in as good a mood as I amBut you don't cause you just feel like you |
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13 years agoby Chevalier des Fleurs
Powerful, but as the comment below says, needs some form. Great job though, you have the right sense of emotional strength to write out a strong poem. Check out some other poets here or don't be afraid to ask for help structuring poems. Heck I still have trouble. 5/5 Keep it up.
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13 years ago
by Justin
You should read my new one i just posted it a few days ago. it's called Dreams and Goblins V.S. Nightmares
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14 years ago
by Jessie
It needs form, would be a better read with punctuation or lines
